Guest Blogged at Read 2 Review- chatting about Characters and their names

•May 14, 2012 • 2 Comments

Acutaly link: http://read2review.com/guest-posts-interviews-spotlights/guest-posts/w/wj-may/the-power-of-a-name/

and for quick reading:

I love getting a new book and falling in love with the story. When an author is able to pull me in so deep I can’t stop reading, or thinking about the plot line or what’s going to happen. How about when you want to jump up and down and scream at the characters?

Speaking of characters, when we’re laughing or screaming at them (in our heads or aloud) one thing that matters, even when we don’t realize it, is that these guys need to have good names. Good, proper names which roll off the tongue smooth as butter.

What does it take to have power behind a name?

For myself as a writer, I want something that sounds good together – the first and last name so if someone were really mad, saying the entire name has some kick behind it.

The name has to match the characters personality… hmmm… or is that the personality has to make the character’s name?

There are also a few basic background need-to-knows. If the character is Irish, giving him (or her) a German name isn’t going to be smooth (like butter, it’ll be more like butter mixed with gravel – bumpy and not good on the tongue). Klaus VanLictenstien just doesn’t have an Irish ring like Kian McDowell.

Another writing hint I’ve been taught is to not have characters with similar names and another suggestion I’ve tried to follow is not having characters names that start with the same letter. It sounds a tad silly but really it does help readers avoid any confusion.

I’m going to use my first book in the Chronicles of Kerrigan as an example. There are a lot of characters throughout but some key names needed to stand out.

The main character, Rae Kerrigan, had her name decided before I even started the book. I had the title and name already picked out. I have a friend with a similar name with Irish background. I loved it as it had such a wonderful ring to it – the first and last name. Well, I changed it up a bit to make it Scottish. It rolls off the tongue (say it with me now, smooth as butter) .

I got lucky with her name and her character was based on her name. She became the muse that created my entire storyline. Her friends, teachers, acquaintances were a bit harder.

Molly, Rae’s best buddy name came next. The name alone seems to represent fun and a little bit of trouble (maybe it’s from watching Molly Ringwald as a kid in all her teen movies).

Devon Wardell came along and I also originally had Dean Cardel. Except the two names sounded too similar so Cardell became Cartel and blurred into Carter (though in my drafts, I still sometimes write Cardel).

Julian, Devon’s buddy, has an artistic side, so to me he needed a name that had the same appeal.

And the character names going on and on… some are named based on the character, others became the characters based on their names.

I’d love to hear other writers (and readers) opinions on what makes a name strong. Where the power is behind a name, and how you create your characters name.

‘Cause in the end, a name is just a name that’s just a name, that’s in a name.

Can I let you in on a little secret? I’m terrible at remembering people’s names

~*~

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SJ Clark Book Review and Promo

•May 13, 2012 • Leave a Comment

Here’s the actual link:  http://sjclarke.com/2012/05/12/review-rae-of-hope-by-w-j-may/#comment-626

 

And here’s the review :)

Review: Rae of Hope, by W. J. May

Book Blurb: How hard do you have to shake a family tree to find out the truth about the past?

Fifteen-year-old Rae Kerrigan never questioned her family’s history. That is until she accepted a scholarship to Guilder Boarding School in England. Guilder is an exclusive, gifted school. Rae has no idea what she is getting herself into or that her family’s past is going to come back and taunt her.

She learns she is part of an unparalleled group of individuals who become inked with a unique tattoo (tatu) on their sixteenth birthday. The tatu enables them to have supernatural powers particular to the shape of their ink-art. Both of her parents where inked, though Rae never knew, as they passed away when she was young. Learning about her family’s past, her evil father and sacrificial mother, Rae needs to decide if there is a ray of hope in her own life.

This book is a bit outside my normal preference of romance with kick. Yes it’s Urban Fantasy, but it’s YA. One of the reasons I don’t read a lot of YA is the kids. Like in many other YA books, we’re dealing with a bunch of pubescent teenagers with drama, angst and attitude to spare. Ugh. I have teenagers. I read to escape them.☺ It takes an intriguing storyline with exceptional promise to convince me to invest my time. Rae of Hope didn’t disappoint.

Rae Kerrigan is strong-willed, independent and somewhat naive. Once she gets to Guilder she learns not everyone is so trustworthy. She does find a few allies in room-mate Molly−a hysterical babbler with charisma and style to spare−who provides the ideal foil to Rae. Devon, the requisite romantic interest, is everything a hero should be. May did a great job of slowly unveiling the characters in a way that made me care.

Inevitable comparisons to Harry Potter arise when we find out why Rae is really at Guilder. The entire school knows more about her mysterious family than she does.

A big mystery reader, I usually know who-done-it long before the ending, but this one was a surprise. The suspense in this story builds at a steady pace and concludes with a shocker ending, at least for me.

This is one book I will recommend to both kids and adult friends. I give this book four Readings.

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About the Author: Wanita May grew up in the fruit belt of Ontario – St.Catharines.  Crazy-happy childhood, she always has had a vivid imagination and loads of energy.

The youngest of six — four older brothers, and sister – they taught her at a young age to be competitive in all aspects of life.

At sixteen, she began competing in athletics (track and field) and before she turned seventeen, she was representing Canada in high jump.  She continued to compete, breaking Canada’s JR High Jump record (1.92m – 6′ 3 1/2″ for those metric-ly challenged).  She attended University of Toronto, and Kansas State University – graduating with a BS degree in Kinesiology and beginning her Masters in Business.

She is currently married, and the mother of three adorable kids.

After her father passed away in 2009, from a six-year battle with cancer (which she still believes he won the fight against), she began to write again.  A passion she’d loved for years, but realized life was too short to keep putting it off.

Her first book, Rae of Hope – from the Chronicles of Kerrigan – is available Nov 15, 2001 by Mitchell Morris Publishing.  It is contracted as a four book series and available in print and ebook through Amazon, Barnes & Noble, Kobo, Smashwords and other online sites.

She is currently represented by Dawn Dowdle of Blue Ridge Literary Agency. Wanita is a writer of Young Adult, Fantasy Fiction and where ever else her little muses take her.

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Rae of Hope eBook – on sale! $2.00 off!

•May 11, 2012 • Leave a Comment

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Guest Blog on Tattoo’s!!

•May 11, 2012 • Leave a Comment

Link to the guest post:  http://wingedpersephone.wordpress.com/2012/05/10/guest-post-with-w-j-may-of-rae-of-hope/

and here’s what I babbled on about:

Let’s give a warm welcome to W.J May, author of Rae of Hope. May is here to introduced us to the world of tattoos.

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Tattoos

What’s your take on Tattoo’s?

Ink-art? Tramp stamp? Marine marker? Passing phase? Beauty art?

Or, are you comments along the lines of: I would NEVER get one! It looks nice on other people. Should I get ONE more? I don’t want one when I’m old with grandkids…

Rae of Hope, the first book in the Chronicles of Kerrigan is a story based on getting inked. At the age of sixteen, each of the students at Guilder Boarding School gets a tattoo– girls on their lower back, boys on the forearm. They refer to it as getting inked. Now, unlike us normal human beings who head off to the tattoo parlour to choose our design, these kids wake up with ink ark mysteriously appearing. To top it off, their ink gives them a type of supernatural power.

I’ve always been fascinated with tattoos – from the designs, the choices people make, the location, the size, the number of tattoos a person has, the reason for their ink art – all of it. I competed in athletics and one thing I always said was that if I made the Olympics, I would get the rings… well, I did represent my country (Canada) internationally but unfortunately not at the Olympics. I have many friends with those five wonderfully joined rings inked on their ankle, or calf, or wrist, or shoulder. It’s a wonderful sentiment – like a Marine’s marker (silly name I made up, but it does sound a little cool imo). It’s a mark well earned in my opinion.

For some, they are easily addictive as well.

With Rae of Hope – I wanted to give the characters something that people pre-judged before knowing who they were. A sixteen year old with ink across her lower back was more likely to be labelled a tramp before knowing any reason why a young girl had the tattoo. It created pressure and “judging a book by its cover” from the onset. Once you get to know the characters and story line you understand the importance of the ink and that pre-labelling is totally off. Hey, I had fun with the story and with coming up with unique tattoo (tatù in the book) that create unique abilities for my characters. I also love challenging readers to come up with a tatù that would be perfect for a villain – or a good guy too!

Regardless of your own personal opinion on ink art, it’s still fun to look and try to figure out the reasoning behind someone’s tattoo.

Hmmm… Now I’m curious if you could be a character in Rae of Hope – what tattoo would you have, and what supernatural ability would you possess?

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Thank you W.J May for stopping by and giving us an insight into tattoos and their importance in your novel, Rae of Hope.

Blurb from Amazon: How hard do you have to shake a family tree to find out the truth about the past?

Fifteen-year-old Rae Kerrigan never questioned her family’s history. That is until she accepted a scholarship to Guilder Boarding School in England. Guilder is an exclusive, gifted school. Rae has no idea what she is getting herself into or that her family’s past is going to come back and taunt her.

She learns she is part of an unparalleled group of individuals who become inked with a unique tattoo (tatu) on their sixteenth birthday. The tatu enables them to have supernatural powers particular to the shape of their ink-art. Both of her parents were inked, though Rae never knew, as they passed away when she was young. Learning about her family’s past, her evil father and sacrificial mother, Rae needs to decide if there is a ray of hope in her own life.

W.J May can be found at her Website, Facebook, and Twitter

Rae of Hope can be purchased at Amazon, Barnes & Nobles

 

Review from the Readers Roundtable young & the restless

•May 8, 2012 • Leave a Comment

here’s the llink:  http://youngandtherestless.thereadersroundtable.com/?p=391

Here’s the review:

Rae of Hope by W.J. May Publisher: Mitchell Morris Publishing, Inc Genre: YA Fantasy Length: 248 pages

Book is available at:

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Summary:

How hard do you have to shake a family tree to find out the truth about the past?

Fifteen-year-old Rae Kerrigan never questioned her family’s history. That is until she accepted a scholarship to Guilder Boarding School in England. Guilder is an exclusive, gifted school. Rae has no idea what she is getting herself into or that her family’s past is going to come back and taunt her.

She learns she is part of an unparalleled group of individuals who become inked with a unique tattoo (tatu) on their sixteenth birthday. The tatu enables them to have supernatural powers particular to the shape of their ink-art. Both of her parents where inked, though Rae never knew, as they passed away when she was young. Learning about her family’s past, her evil father and sacrificial mother, Rae needs to decide if there is a ray of hope in her own life.

 

AJ’s Review:

W.J. May is a new author to me, but she is definitely going on my list of young adult authors. Rae of Hope is the perfect combination of teen angst, magic, suspense, and romance. Ms. May grabbed my attention from page one and kept me engrossed until the very end.

Rae Kerrigan is a young lady who has been marked by the tatu like her parents before and suddenly finds herself admitted to the Guilder Boarding School. Normally, this would be exciting for a young teenager, except Rae never applied to the Guilder Boarding School. However, she pulls up her big girl panties and decides to attend against her better judgment. I loved this amazing young woman who is strong-willed, feisty, independent, and trustworthy. You can’t help but smile as you watch her grow into using her powers, but on the flip side, weep as she learns more about her family’s secrets. Unfortunately, it’s the secrets that Rae has to be leery of, but more importantly, the enemies that lurk in the background.

Rae of Hope is a well-written, creative, fast-paced, action-packed story with engaging characters, plenty of twist and turns in the plot to keep it interesting and fresh, young, uninhibited puppy love, humor that will have you laughing for days on end, and enough suspense to keep you guessing as to what will happen next until the very end. In addition, the secondary characters increased the depth of the plot while allowing the story to progress. I especially enjoyed Rae’s roommate, Molly, who is charismatic, humorous, and an awesome choice in a best friend.

If you like stories where the world-building is amazing, the characters are genuine, but flawed which only brings them to life on the page, the emotions are raw, and the climax has a thrilling edge that will have you begging for more with the turn of every page, then Rae of Hope is definitely the book to read.

Rated 4.5 Seashells by AJ!

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Wanita May grew up in the fruit belt of Ontario – St.Catharines.  Crazy-happy childhood, she always has had a vivid imagination and loads of energy.

The youngest of six — four older brothers, and sister – they taught her at a young age to be competitive in all aspects of life.

At sixteen, she began competing in athletics (track and field) and before she turned seventeen, she was representing Canada in high jump.  She continued to compete, breaking Canada’s JR High Jump record (1.92m – 6′ 3 1/2″ for those metric-ly challenged).  She attented University of Toronto, and Kansas State University – graduating with a BS degree in Kinesiology and beginning her Masters in Business.

She is currently married, and the mother of three adorable kids.

After her father passed away in 2009, from a six-year battle with cancer (which she still believes he won the fight against), she began to write again.  A passion she’d loved for years, but realized life was too short to keep putting it off.

Her first book, Rae of Hope – from the Chronicles of Kerrigan – is available Nov 15, 2001 by Mitchell Morris Publishing.  It is contracted as a four book series and available in print and ebook through Amazon, Barnes & Noble, Kobo, Smashwords and other online sites.

She is currently represented by Dawn Dowdle of Blue Ridge Literary Agency. Wanita is a writer of Young Adult, Fantasy Fiction and where ever else her little muses take her.

Blog:  http://wanitajump.wordpress.com/

Author website: http://www.wanitamay.yolasite.com/

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Review of Rae of Hope by Place of Reads – ewitching Blog Tours

•May 8, 2012 • Leave a Comment

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Description: How hard do you have to shake a family tree to find out the truth of the past?

Fifteen-year-old Rae Kerrigan has never questioned her family’s history. That is until she accepted a scholarship to Guilder Boarding School in England. Guilder is a very unique, gifted school.

Rae has no idea what she is getting herself into or that her family’s past is going to come back and taunt her. She learns she is part of an unparalleled group of individuals who become marked with a unique tattoo (tatù) on their sixteenth birthday. The tatù enables them to have supernatural powers particular to the shape of their marking.

Both her parents were marked though Rae never knew, as they passed away when she was young and never told her. Learning about her family’s past, her evil father and sacrificial mother, Rae needs to decide if there is a ray of hope for her own life.

 

About the Author:

 

Wanita May grew up in the fruit belt of Ontario – St.Catharines.  Crazy-happy childhood, she always has had a vivid imagination and loads of energy.

 
The youngest of six — four older brothers, and sister — they taught her at a young age to be competitive in all aspects of life.
 
At sixteen, she began competing in athletics (track and field) and before she turned seventeen, she was representing Canada in high jump.  She continued to compete, breaking Canada’s JR High Jump record (1.92m – 6′ 3 1/2″ for those metric-ly challenged).  She attented University of Toronto, and Kansas State University – graduating with a BS degree in Kinesiology and beginning her Masters in Business.
 
She is currently married, and the mother of three adorable kids.
 
After her father passed away in 2009, from a six-year battle with cancer (which she still believes he won the fight against), she began to write again.  A passion she’d loved for years, but realized life was too short to keep putting it off.
 
Her first book, Rae of Hope – from the Chronicles of Kerrigan – is available Nov 15, 2001 by Mitchell Morris Publishing.  It is contracted as a four book series and available in print and ebook through Amazon, Barnes & Noble, Kobo, Smashwords and other online sites.
 
She is currently represented by Dawn Dowdle of Blue Ridge Literary Agency. Wanita is a writer of Young Adult, Fantasy Fiction and where ever else her little muses take her.
 
 
 
 

My Review:

 
 
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

This is a great book.  To me it is like if Harry Potter was a girl, and instead of a wand, you get a tatú.  So let me explain some of the great points about this book.

 
First, Rae Kerrigan is a great character.  She is the wounded little girl who watched her house burn down with her parents, with little idea of what the future will hold for her.  When she discovers what actually happened with her parents, she carries her burdens as well as any other teenager would: as best she can. 
 
I did love the changes at the school, how an all men’s school had to integrate the female students, and how the guys went crazy.  Ah, the joys of hormones and the mixing of the genders. 
 
Other great points on this book are:
·         The glossary at the end (though, it would be good to have it at the beginning, as I didn’t realize it was available until the end of the book).
·         It has a decent ending.  Kind of expected, but not bad as a whole.
·         There is more than a love triangle.  You got 4 or 5 guys all vying for Rae, but even better is what happens in her love life. *No spoilers there!
·         There are a few twists and turns, some of which are expected, some which are definitely not.
 
Now, I have a few issues that could easily be resolved.
·         This story is how you get the background story very piecemeal.  You get a little hint in one chapter, and 4 chapters later, another bit of info.  I would have liked the overwhelming information in one long chapter instead of several chapters spread throughout the book. 
·         Would have been nice to have a tatú glossary.  Yes my imagination is good, but even nicer if I didn’t have to look up some of the symbols to understand what it might look like. 
 
Overall, I really enjoyed this book.  I recommend it and hope to see more good things from Ms. May. 

Happy Reading!

 

Book Review+ Swag Competition for Rae of Hope

•May 8, 2012 • Leave a Comment

I stopped by Arianne Cruz’ blog for a review of Rae of Hope and also a swag competition

Friday, May 4, 2012

Virtual Blog Tour: Rae of Hope Promo, Review, & Giveaway

Today, I am participating in the Rae of Hope blog tour. Check out the promo and my review below!

Rae of Hope
ISBN: 9780983129790
Author: W. J. May
Trade paperback 6×9
Pages 248
Price $17.99
Genre: YA Fantasy
About the Book
How hard do you have to shake a family tree to find out the truth about the past?
Fifteen-year-old Rae Kerrigan never questioned her family’s history. That is until she accepted a scholarship to Guilder Boarding School in England. Guilder is an exclusive, gifted school. Rae has no idea what she is getting herself into or that her family’s past is going to come back and taunt her.
She learns she is part of an unparalleled group of individuals who become inked with a unique tattoo (tatu) on their sixteenth birthday. The tatu enables them to have supernatural powers particular to the shape of their ink-art. Both of her parents where inked, though Rae never knew, as they passed away when she was young. Learning about her family’s past, her evil father and sacrificial mother, Rae needs to decide if there is a ray of hope in her own life.
About the Author:
Wanita May grew up in the fruit belt of Ontario – St.Catharines.  Crazy-happy childhood, she always has had a vivid imagination and loads of energy.
The youngest of six — four older brothers, and sister — they taught her at a young age to be competitive in all aspects of life.
At sixteen, she began competing in athletics (track and field) and before she turned seventeen, she was representing Canada in high jump.  She continued to compete, breaking Canada’s JR High Jump record (1.92m – 6′ 3 1/2″ for those metric-ly challenged).  She attented University of Toronto, and Kansas State University – graduating with a BS degree in Kinesiology and beginning her Masters in Business.
She is currently married, and the mother of three adorable kids.
After her father passed away in 2009, from a six-year battle with cancer (which she still believes he won the fight against), she began to write again.  A passion she’d loved for years, but realized life was too short to keep putting it off.
Her first book, Rae of Hope – from the Chronicles of Kerrigan – is available Nov 15, 2001 by Mitchell Morris Publishing.  It is contracted as a four book series and available in print and ebook through Amazon, Barnes & Noble, Kobo, Smashwords and other online sites.
She is currently represented by Dawn Dowdle of Blue Ridge Literary Agency. Wanita is a writer of Young Adult, Fantasy Fiction and where ever else her little muses take her.

Facebook: http://www.facebook.com/wanitajump

Review
My first video review! Check it out! If you prefer a written review, just scroll down :)

Gush, gush, gush! This book was super awesome :)
Where do I start? Oh yeah, get the negative review out of the way :)

  • The pdf copy I received had errors as I usually notice. I was told that the copy I received must have been the uncorrected proof. So this section of the review may or may not be true in relation to the print copy of the book.
That’s about all the bad things I could think of. Now, on to the good stuff. Where do I start?!
  • Rae is awesome. I love her tatu. The way the author described it was just amazing. I felt like I could almost see the tatu right in front of me. The book mostly dealt with her internal insecurities that everyone expects her to turn out just like her father. At one point she just gave up, but a little nudging from Headmaster Lanford helped her get back to her feet.
  • Devon is such a sweetheart, and that dimple? Oh my. He’s Rae’s heart throb. He is also her tutor/mentor to get her caught up with school. At the end of the book, however, something nags inside me, that there must be something wrong with Devon. Even though it was a happy ending, I can’t help feeling that Devon is not what he seems.
  • Molly is Rae’s roommate and she talks nonstop. She also has a great fashion sense and made me wish she was my roommate!
  • Headmaster Lanford was the cool teacher that everyone liked. Or did they?
  • Dean Carter was feared. He was a chauvinist. Or was he?
  • There were so many characters! It was so much fun getting to know them and their different abilities.
  • The book was 235 pages which explains why the story didn’t have that much development as far as heightened stakes or multiple dilemmas besides Rae’s internal battle. However, getting to know the different powers of each character was enough to feed my curiousity..for now.
Check out two of my favorite excerpts and a quote from Julian!

      “Are you banned from talking to other girls tonight, or is it just girls from Guilder?” She tried putting on her most innocent face. Seems I’m not the only one with rules.       “Originally, it was just the Guilder girls, and then you walked into the Oratory looking all beautiful. When Beth found out you’re the girl I tutor, I was mainly banned from talking to you.” Devon grinned mischievously. “Personally, it’s worth the risk. However, I’d better head over before she has a coronary.”       Rae didn’t want him to walk away but didn’t know what to say to make him stay. She clenched her hands, feeling her nails dig into her palms. Beautiful…he thinks I’m beautiful… Rae was full of competing emotions.       Devon took a few steps toward Beth. A slower country song started playing and he paused. “Ahh, screw it.” He turned around, his dimple appearing on his cheek.       “Pardon?” Rae raised her eyebrows at him, wondering what he meant.       He reached for her hand and pulled her to the dance floor. “If she can’t understand I’m only trying to help a friend fit in, then she can brew.”

      Rae wiped sweaty palms on her jeans and lightly tapped Devon’s door.       “Andy, I already told you I’m not going with you guys.” Devon shouted from behind the door. “Leave me alone!”       She wasn’t sure he’d be any happier to see she wasn’t Andy, but Rae knocked harder anyway. She jumped back when Devon swung the door open, looking ready to cuss her out.       His eyes widened and his body language changed completely when he saw her. “What’re you doing here?”       Rae froze. She hadn’t planned any of this. It’d all been spur of the moment. She knew she needed to say the right words, to truly apologize to him, but at the moment she had nothing but scattered thoughts banging around her head. So she said the first thing that came to mind. “I was wondering if you wanted to head into town for dinner with me, Molly and Julian.” She tried to swallow, but her mouth had turned completely dry.       “Dinner?” He sounded and looked dumbfounded, as if the word itself didn’t make any sense coming from her.       “You know, we go to a restaurant, we order some food, the waitress brings it out, we eat it and then we pay the bill?” She realized [she] sounded exactly like Molly. “Crap, that’s not what I meant!” She stomped her foot. “I’m trying to apologize. I’m just really lousy at it.”       Devon laughed. She wondered how much he enjoyed seeing her at odds with herself, but in the end, he must have decided to put her out of her misery. “Friends?” He smiled, his dimple winking at her from his cheek.       Rae’s heart melted, like it always did when his dimple made an appearance. “Hard as this is, I’m offering a free dinner to show how sincere I am.”       “FREE dinner?” He leaned behind his door. “Heck yeah! Let me grab my coat! I can hear Molly at the stairs complaining you’re taking too long.”

Julian tossed his car keys at Devon. “Just don’t let her drive. She may be talented, but she’s a bloody American.”

Overall, I am so excited for the next book, Dark Nebula! I already signed up to receive an ARC copy! Check out everyone’s tatus and abilities below! Then, enter the giveaway and tell me in the comments, what kind of ink would you like and what kind of powers would it have? Be creative. You don’t have to pick the tatus from the characters below. Make sure to leave your email address or Twitter name so I can notify you if you win!  U.S./Canada ONLY. Good luck everyone!
UPDATE: The giveaway deadline have been extended to May 31.
Name Tatu Ability
Molly lightning electricity
Devon fox w/ big ears speed, agility, hearing, jumping, night vision
Riley cheetah speed, agility, nervous feeling
Charlie Vitruvian man healing
Julian undefined in book 1 draw future – will reveal tatu in book 2
Haley whirlwind/tornado wind
Dean Carter similar to all-seeing eye see the past w/ direct human contact
Headmaster Lanford man sitting in yoga position floating levitation
Andy wolf shape-shifter
Rob eagle shape-shifter
Nicholas open book like McGyver – handy and smart

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